Changes Made Due to Feedback

Since looking at our constructive feedback, we have been making adjustments to our video according to what our target audience have written. Since have a limited time and budget, we haven't been able to re-shoot any footage to add to our narrative. This means that we have had to re edit our existing footage to improve the storyline.

We started off by adjusting the colour correction to make the transitions between shots run smoother. We did this by adjusting the filter ratios on the individual clips.

We also received some feedback about the tempo of which the shots were cut to, which made the video appear "disjointed" from the song. So to fix this issue, we reused the clip made for multiclip and adjusted it to the tempo and made sure the clips fit the beat.

The new multi-clip section that we added.  

Other comments made, included points about the band not being "zombified" at the end enough. There is no way for us to over exaggerate the fact they are undead beings, however we have added an overlay to a selection of the shots to change the colour correction to change it slightly over exposed.

A few more comments were people saying about how there needed to be a few more shots of the band together and how the femme fatal character does not appear in the majority of the video. This is mixed views as some think it adds to the suspense, whereas others do not agree and think it makes the narrative appear a bit vague and unclear.

This the record company title we added at the end.